my navel,
a pink mound
peering and chuckling
over my pyjamas.
I poked my pinky into my flesh
a skin landscape, a planet of hair
laughing back at me
as I glided my razor across my
smooth gillette face.
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"Rage, goddess, sing of the rage of Achilles" (1.1)
In Medias Res
The story of Achilles begins in medias res, nine years into a battle between the Trojans and the Greeks. The poet does not give historical background for the war or its duration, assuming readers already know the context. For more on the Trojan War's origins, students often consult Edith Hamilton's classic Mythology or read about the Judgment of Paris. There is even archaeological evidence that Troy may have existed in the Bronze Age.
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The poet is silent about much of the background, focusing instead on mortals and immortals. The Iliad could well be called The Rage of Achilles, as anger and loss thread through the poem. The muses, invoked for inspiration, act as furies in the poem's opening: "Rage, goddess."
The god quaked with rage (1.54)
The epic traces the genealogy of Achilles’s resentment, beginning with Apollo’s anger at Agamemnon for refusing to return his slave girl, Chryseis. Apollo’s wrath brings a plague to the Greek camp. The soldiers want to return home, but Agamemnon refuses to give in, even at the cost of his men’s lives—echoing the selfishness of a corporate boss clinging to privilege.
A Dispute Among Children
Book One centers on a childish dispute between Agamemnon and Achilles. When Achilles protests Agamemnon’s selfishness, Agamemnon retaliates by seizing Achilles’s slave girl, Briseis. Achilles withdraws from battle, vowing not to fight, comforted by Patroclus and Athena.
The Boy with Fiery Hair (1.232)
Achilles is depicted as a youth with fiery red hair—a symbol of his rage. Feeling entitled and above others, he sees himself as nearly divine. When insulted, he appeals to his mother, the sea nymph Thetis, who promises to ask Zeus to avenge him.
Thetis, the Old Man of the Sea’s Daughter
In a poignant scene, Achilles walks the shore, praying to Thetis for vengeance and honor. His tragic flaw is not recognizing his own mortality.
Uncontrollable Laughter Broke from the Gods (1.721)
The book ends with the gods laughing at the mortals. Is it schadenfreude? Do the gods laugh at Achilles, at mortals, or at our delusions?
when it seems you have been cut out from
construction paper,
block speckled primary color green,
a carved-out human form,
when it seems as if identity has been placed on the shelving,
— fleshed-out and unread —
what, instead,
walks around in its place is the abstract me
with abstract legs and triangular feet,
a circle standing in for a noggin,
made by a bunch of kindergarten scholars,
a veritable platonic form,
that forgot about its meat on the shelf,
cautiously rotting
So I go and pick up my half-smelly carcass,
filed between a copy of
jane eyre and buddingbrooks,
and slap my self around a bit like a butcher with
a premium slice,
salve a healthy dose of vinegar to spicen up
my languishing corpuscles,
jimmy into my corpse once again as if it were a
union suit
nostalgically lined to my handsome rectangle;