Aug 15, 2011

First Sentence of a Failed Novel

Do you have failed first sentences of novels you tried to write? Here's one:

Her skin was chalky white, but Patrick thought she was rosy. Amelia was stretched out on the bed, beneath the mosquito netting.


Please share your own failed sentence in the comments section:


Image source: the new yorker



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